Friday, 30 August 2019
Wednesday, 21 August 2019
Show don't Tell Sentences.
Hello, my name is Luca and I am in Room 22, and today our teacher gave us some sentences that were telling us exactly what happened and she wanted us to recreate them by showing the sentence
e.g. he was happy. And the first sentence is "Mason was shocked" this is the showing version.
Tell: Mason was shocked.
Show: As Mason's face turned pale his heart skipped a beat and his jaw dropped.
Tell: Rakesh was excited to see his Dad.
Show: Rakesh's face turned bright pink and his eyes sparkled with joy as he saw his Dad.
Tell: James felt sad.
Show: James' eyes filled up with tears his heart was beating rapidly he could barely breath tears ran down his face.
Tell: Zac was mad
Show: Zac's face went red in an instant as his fist sped through the wall in front of him and made it crumble.
e.g. he was happy. And the first sentence is "Mason was shocked" this is the showing version.
Tell: Mason was shocked.
Show: As Mason's face turned pale his heart skipped a beat and his jaw dropped.
Tell: Rakesh was excited to see his Dad.
Show: Rakesh's face turned bright pink and his eyes sparkled with joy as he saw his Dad.
Tell: James felt sad.
Show: James' eyes filled up with tears his heart was beating rapidly he could barely breath tears ran down his face.
Tell: Zac was mad
Show: Zac's face went red in an instant as his fist sped through the wall in front of him and made it crumble.
Friday, 16 August 2019
Sick Sentences
Hello my name is Luca our teacher gave us some sentences and she called the
"Sick Sentences" these are the sentences...
The man walked up the slope. He used poles. The sun was bright. The sky was blue. He looked forward to the view from the top.
And we had to make them more enthusiastic and healthy. These are the healthy sentences...
The man dragged his legs as he trudged along the mountain. He stabbed his poles into the ice as he moved inches across the freezing cold blocks of ice. The sun above him
enveloped him as he trudged along the cold ice. The sky above him looked like a baby blue blanket above him. As he slowly moved his eyes he could see the very tip of the mountain.
"Sick Sentences" these are the sentences...
The man walked up the slope. He used poles. The sun was bright. The sky was blue. He looked forward to the view from the top.
And we had to make them more enthusiastic and healthy. These are the healthy sentences...
The man dragged his legs as he trudged along the mountain. He stabbed his poles into the ice as he moved inches across the freezing cold blocks of ice. The sun above him
enveloped him as he trudged along the cold ice. The sky above him looked like a baby blue blanket above him. As he slowly moved his eyes he could see the very tip of the mountain.
Friday, 9 August 2019
Thursday, 8 August 2019
Sir Edmund Hillary genially
Hello this is my Sir Edmund Hillary genially tell me if you like it in the comments.
Friday, 2 August 2019
bird genially
Hello everyone this is my bird genially, it has 8 facts about the Black Robin bird.
please tell me what you think
please tell me what you think
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