Hello, my name is Luca and I am in Room 22, and today our teacher gave us some sentences that were telling us exactly what happened and she wanted us to recreate them by showing the sentence
e.g. he was happy. And the first sentence is "Mason was shocked" this is the showing version.
Tell: Mason was shocked.
Show: As Mason's face turned pale his heart skipped a beat and his jaw dropped.
Tell: Rakesh was excited to see his Dad.
Show: Rakesh's face turned bright pink and his eyes sparkled with joy as he saw his Dad.
Tell: James felt sad.
Show: James' eyes filled up with tears his heart was beating rapidly he could barely breath tears ran down his face.
Tell: Zac was mad
Show: Zac's face went red in an instant as his fist sped through the wall in front of him and made it crumble.
e.g. he was happy. And the first sentence is "Mason was shocked" this is the showing version.
Tell: Mason was shocked.
Show: As Mason's face turned pale his heart skipped a beat and his jaw dropped.
Tell: Rakesh was excited to see his Dad.
Show: Rakesh's face turned bright pink and his eyes sparkled with joy as he saw his Dad.
Tell: James felt sad.
Show: James' eyes filled up with tears his heart was beating rapidly he could barely breath tears ran down his face.
Tell: Zac was mad
Show: Zac's face went red in an instant as his fist sped through the wall in front of him and made it crumble.
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