Friday 16 August 2019

Sick Sentences

Hello my name is Luca our teacher gave us some sentences and she called the
"Sick Sentences"   these are the sentences... 
The man walked up the slope. He used poles. The sun was bright. The sky was blue. He looked forward to the view from the top.



And we had to make them more enthusiastic and healthy. These are the healthy sentences...

The man dragged his legs as he trudged along the mountain. He stabbed his poles into the ice as he moved inches across the freezing cold blocks of ice. The sun above him
enveloped him as he trudged along the cold ice. The sky above him looked like a baby blue blanket above him. As  he slowly moved his eyes he could see the very tip of the mountain.

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